In the library, Anne and Kim have small talk after class about writing skill. Both of them are suggesting there own way to write much better essay.
-Kim: I was trying to write essay yesterday, but it was not that essay. Even though I tried to take deep breath what I used to do, I couldn't finish.
-Anne: Really? Taking deep breath might be helpful before writing essay. Because, I used to do that too whenever I get tried and don't know what to write.
-Kim: I don't know..It's really hard to find the way that makes me calm and help to make lots of ideas. can you suggest me no matter what?
-Anne: Have you tried to write brainstorming? This is like backgrond that you have experienced of felt. That will be helpful a lot begining the essay.
-Kim: I know brain storming. But, um,,, I have never tried to wirte it down. I just thought about which are should be a good topic or title something like that.
-Anne: If you just keep thinking and don't write it doing, you will hardly remember what you thouht and lose the way to keep follow the story.
-Kim: Oh!! That's why I couldn't keep follow my story. You know what? After I'm done writing essay and I double check, I recognize the story is not clear what I'm staying.
-Anne: The second my suggestion is you should satisfy rough draft and find draft. Using the brain storming, you write rough draft for not loosing and follwing right way.
-Kim: I know rough draft, because my professor always requires to hand out the rough draft before hand out essay.
-Anne: There is always same reason why professor requires to do something. Finally, do you read newspaper or books ? If not, you should start from now on. It's so important to you.
-Kim: What? How come I can read newspaper or books? I don't have enough time to do that. I'm so busy enough to write essay and other assinments.
-Anne: Reading something helps you to expand your ideas and experiences. When you have read, how will be your feeling? So, you should start. I hope you can finish up the essay as well. Good luck and see ya!
-Kim: I was trying to write essay yesterday, but it was not that essay. Even though I tried to take deep breath what I used to do, I couldn't finish.
-Anne: Really? Taking deep breath might be helpful before writing essay. Because, I used to do that too whenever I get tried and don't know what to write.
-Kim: I don't know..It's really hard to find the way that makes me calm and help to make lots of ideas. can you suggest me no matter what?
-Anne: Have you tried to write brainstorming? This is like backgrond that you have experienced of felt. That will be helpful a lot begining the essay.
-Kim: I know brain storming. But, um,,, I have never tried to wirte it down. I just thought about which are should be a good topic or title something like that.
-Anne: If you just keep thinking and don't write it doing, you will hardly remember what you thouht and lose the way to keep follow the story.
-Kim: Oh!! That's why I couldn't keep follow my story. You know what? After I'm done writing essay and I double check, I recognize the story is not clear what I'm staying.
-Anne: The second my suggestion is you should satisfy rough draft and find draft. Using the brain storming, you write rough draft for not loosing and follwing right way.
-Kim: I know rough draft, because my professor always requires to hand out the rough draft before hand out essay.
-Anne: There is always same reason why professor requires to do something. Finally, do you read newspaper or books ? If not, you should start from now on. It's so important to you.
-Kim: What? How come I can read newspaper or books? I don't have enough time to do that. I'm so busy enough to write essay and other assinments.
-Anne: Reading something helps you to expand your ideas and experiences. When you have read, how will be your feeling? So, you should start. I hope you can finish up the essay as well. Good luck and see ya!