Ebola problem is striking over the world. But! Why specialists are asking stupid questions? One example is that they are saying how she, who is nurse and had been Africa, did get Ebola. The answer is simple. Because, she had taken care of Ebola in Africa. The nurse who got Ebola was enforced to stay in a room. That was unheated, no shower system, and no toilet bowl but one box. We cant even say it is a room. It's just a tent. Indeed, is it right way as human that enforcing to stay her in that place? Likewise Jon Stewart said, I think mandatory quarantine is overreacting about Ebola. According to the video clip, one person says that you can get Ebola sitting next person who throws up. If we change what he said, sneeze is making you Ebola too? Likewise, we don't need to believe all of information that comes from media like Jon Stewart's position on media. If we know just little bit more detail infromation about Ebola, we don't have to worry about getting infected Ebola.
In this post, I would like to talk about Ebola and one video clip of Jon Stewart' daily show.n this post, I would like to talk about Ebola and one video clip of Jon Stewart' daily show. That video is about reporting how much media gives and doctors or scientists give different information of Ebola.
Ebola problem is striking over the world. But! Why specialists are asking stupid questions? One example is that they are saying how she, who is nurse and had been Africa, did get Ebola. The answer is simple. Because, she had taken care of Ebola in Africa. The nurse who got Ebola was enforced to stay in a room. That was unheated, no shower system, and no toilet bowl but one box. We cant even say it is a room. It's just a tent. Indeed, is it right way as human that enforcing to stay her in that place? Likewise Jon Stewart said, I think mandatory quarantine is overreacting about Ebola. According to the video clip, one person says that you can get Ebola sitting next person who throws up. If we change what he said, sneeze is making you Ebola too? Likewise, we don't need to believe all of information that comes from media like Jon Stewart's position on media. If we know just little bit more detail infromation about Ebola, we don't have to worry about getting infected Ebola.
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In here, I will post my found poem that is from my creative nonfiction essay. This poem will indicate my revision and analyse more detail about my essay.
Meet and say goodbye over and over again My I-20 is an wanton first love Curse my I-20 while I'm loving it Because I didn't bring I-20, I asked my father to bring it Because of I-20, I curse that I depart from my home country Because of I-20, I love that I arrive to America In the swamp of airplane, in the swamp of airplane I'm looking for much huger world In order to do not regret in my future I'm thinking crazily Considering crazily Following what I had learned in this class, I wrote my own creative nonfiction essay: Meaningful One Month. 6 Ways to be a Hemingway-Level Productive Badass was one of what I had learned and discussed in this class and helped me to begin how to write creative nonfiction essay. So, my six steps goes like this:
1. Brainstorming First of all, I did brain storming to get some ideas. So, I stand up and consider about what I had done for last month or walked around. Then, I made a huge chart on a center and wrote down some events which are related with the main idea. Therefore, the main idea is supposed to be a theme. 2. Introduction Actually, making introduction is really hard to me even though I know my theme. As following what I learned in class, I just remembered that the hook should be important which means introduction should be interesting to people who will read my essay. If not, they lose their interest and feel boring. 3. Body In this part, I could start as well. Because, I could write my story following the time even though there were some grammar problems. 4. Conclusion I was stuck in this part due to I didn't know how to finish this essay up. Just saying like 'So, I had fun a lot' is so awkward and not interesting at all. Therefore, I searched on Google and asked my friend to get some ideas. 5. Check After done all of introduction, body, and conclusion paragraphs, there were supposed to be grammar problems or not matching sentences. Therefore, I double checked this shitty draft. 6. Revise Shitty draft is not done essay, so I revised all of problem taking look my essay from beginning to end of essay. The first my truth is family because my parents gave me birth. Family always cheer me up right next to me, give me the true love and never lie to me. If I'm doing wrong, my family never lie that you are right and tell me that you should fix your behavior directly. The second my truth is my dream. What I want to do is so firm, so I came here, United States and I am doing study what I have wanted. Having my own company is my future job in home country, South Korea. Therefore, this can be my truth and my truth never change at all.
In each my behavior, there was my truth and that is why I could tell my story as writing my creative nonfiction essay. In my essay, I described exactly what I had done during last month. What I had seen is my one of truth, what I had smelled is my one of truth, and what I had tasted is my one of truth. Likewise, I can say that if there are 5 senses, my truth is also there because those 5 senses are my behavior. class: So last week in class, we talked a little bit more about telling and showing and went over are reading assignments. One of are reading assignments we went over was "Everyone Knew I Was Gay Except My Brother" (I believe that was the title of it). So Mr. Mangini went over each section and had the class decipher between whether it was showing or telling. That really helped me get a better understanding of showing and telling because I would get them confused at times. We also went over another reading I forgot the title but it was about a woman name Henrietta that had cancer and they took her cells with out her knowing and her cells were the first cells that were able to stay alive and multiply and they were able to use them to treat and prevent some diseases. I still can't believe that her family never got paid for that. That's America for ya! We also talked more about are Creative Nonfiction Essay and what the professor is looking for. He mentioned some literacy devices such as Juxtaposition and Theme. He mentioned that if we have a series of Vignettes from are blog and were including them in our essays, make sure there's a connection between each story so that it makes sense. That's something I had trouble with when I was writing my essay but once I got into the flow of things, everything started to make sense to me.
home: I was preparing presentation for Business class. This week was very hard and stressful. I need to take some rest enough. Until i effort to prepare the presentation, I will get freedom and rest. Therefore, I would like to endure this time for freedom. Theme: Threat This message is about talking about my friends. the topic in this dialouge is treating to my freind who didn't give me back my money yet. Jinwoo: HA. Jinwoo: I'm so poor. Jinwoo: Nowadays I bought a new phone. Jinwoo: real poor. Jinwoo: real poor. Me: kkkkkkk Me: When will you give me back the money?? Me:kkkkkkkk Jinwoo: Ha Jinwoo: I'm creditor.... Jinwoo: When I get $215 money from my friend, I will give it to you. Me: kkkkkkkkkkkkk Am I a moneylender..?? Jinwoo: yes.. Jinwoo: you're bad boy. Jinwoo: (Emoticon)sad Me: So why did you borrow it??
Jinwoo: You are right Jinwoo: kkkkkkkk Jinwoo: I spend lots of money for shopping. That was my fault Me: kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Just kidding um..um..um just give me back slowly.. kkkkkkkkkkk Jinwoo:n..n...no....haha I...I....I will just give you Me: tha..that..that's fine...I will be poor kkkkkkkkk 1. Familar Place : In Korea, there is a small moutain which is called Namsan. When I see the night view from there, I am totally absorbed in watching the view. Because, I can see all of things such as lots of busy cars are going on their own way, and lots of building are bright because of turning the lights on. So, we can see the busy life of Seoul, which is the capital of South Korea. In spring, we can see falling cherry blossoms. In fall, we can see lots of so red maple leaves.
2. Starnge Place Kim : I will depict one place where we have never been. I will give you 10 dollars if you give me a correct answer, deal? Lee : deal! Kim : This area is so myterious. If we see it from the sky, this area just looks like huge ocean and some islands. we can feel this area is so quiet and peaceful. However, the problem is that event that we can not explain exactly happens sometimes in this area. For example, airplane is gone for couple of days. And the airplane lands, then the people who were in the airplane said we just come here on time. Lee : So, you mean Bemuda? Kim : Right. |